Make your own Hooping Haiku

I want to hear your Hooping Haikus!
Here are some instructions and tips for writing a Haiku..


1.Think about a theme for your haiku and write down some of the words that come to mind on that theme.

2.Organize your thoughts roughly onto three lines. First, set the scene, then expand on that by expressing a feeling, making an observation or recording an action. Keep it simple.

3.Polish your haiku into three lines, the first with five syllables, the second line with seven syllables and the third line with five syllables. It may take some time and substitution of words to make it fit.


Here are a couple Haikus I wrote..

Hooping From The Heart
Endless, Flowing, Expression
Energy Release


A Swirling Hoop Dance
Unleashing Love Energy
Replenish The Earth

Tags: Creative, Haiku, Poem

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Permalink Reply by Rhonda J. on February 17, 2012 at 10:49am

Here we go again

inside this circle that spins

setting free my soul

Permalink Reply by Sarah Bear on March 16, 2012 at 2:10pm

love it! thankyou for your reply :) I wasn't sure anyone would ever see this post haha <3<3<3

Permalink Reply by Robyn Brehaut (HulaDoula) on February 17, 2012 at 11:46am
The Great Mother turns
Spin without fear together
Transforming Begins
Permalink Reply by Sarah Bear on March 16, 2012 at 2:11pm

I love this one too!!  I like how you mentioned letting go of fear, and the transformation that occurs <3<3<3

Permalink Reply by Domini on March 16, 2012 at 7:38pm

Inside the circle

I become invincible

Nothing can hurt me

 

I turn off my mind

Shut out the world for a bit

And dance my butt off

 

 

 

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