I wrote this for my poetry workshop...it's about hooping on the dancefloor, thought I'd share. <3


Dance (or This Saturday Night)

 

I wanna

spiral spiral, come unbound…

chased by rhythm, destroyed by sound.

 

Break,

crest with the high the melody made.

(dRown drOwn droWn  drowN [strong wave])

Shimmy, in the shattered time

gulping laser bubbled aural wine.

Raze my inhibition, spring free

Grind my soul, my hips to harmony.

 

My desire is rooted, chronic…

need it deep, fast,  polyphonic.

(shove it shove it [shake it])

If it came in pill form, I would take it.

 

I wanna

spiral spiral, come unbound…

chased by rhythm, destroyed by sound.

 

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Comment by Cookie Hoops on March 30, 2011 at 12:26pm

omg I LOVE this powerful poem! AWESOME!

 

Comment by Jessica Griffith on March 31, 2011 at 3:47pm
Great poem, you can just feel the raw intensity.
Comment by Mrs. Skittles of Sparkle & Burn* on April 1, 2011 at 7:45am
I love it! It is even better when you read it though. :)

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